Game Developer's Portfolio

Finalizing your Demo Reels Assignment

Lecture 2 in Chapter 9

Peer Review Forum: Near-Final Demo Reel Feedback

Assignment Overview

This is your last chance for feedback before finalizing your demo reel! Share your near-final version and receive peer critiques to refine pacing, transitions, and clarity before submission.

What You Need to Do:

  1. Post your near-final demo reel.

    • This should be a polished version, incorporating previous feedback where possible.
    • Focus on pacing, transitions, and clarity, using design principles (contrast, balance, rhythm, etc.).

  2. Write a short text describing specific issues or concerns you want feedback on.

    • Example: "I’m worried that my transitions feel too abrupt. Do they help maintain flow, or do they break immersion?"
    • Example: "Is my reel communicating the complexity of my game’s AI properly? Should I slow down any parts?"

  3. Give feedback to at least 3 classmates.

    • Prioritize classmates with fewer comments.
    • Ensure feedback is constructive and specific (e.g., suggest how to improve pacing or transitions, not just “it’s good”).
    • Evaluate if the message is clearly communicated as intended by the creator.

Grading (10 Points Total)

  • 6 Points - Submit your near-final demo reel with clear pacing, transitions, and clarity.
  • 1 Point - Write a focused request for feedback on specific concerns (contrast, timing, text legibility, etc.).
  • 3 Points - Provide meaningful feedback to at least 3 peers, prioritizing those with fewer responses.

Peer Feedback Guidelines

  • Is the pacing engaging, or does it feel rushed/too slow?
  • Are the transitions smooth and natural?
  • Is the message clear, or do certain parts need more emphasis?
  • Does it follow design principles (contrast, balance, rhythm, hierarchy, etc.)?
  • Does the demo reel leave a lasting impression?

Example of a Great Feedback Comment:

✅ "Your transitions are mostly smooth, but the cut at 0:15 feels a bit abrupt. Maybe add a slight fade or time it with the music beat?"

❌ "Looks good!" (This is not helpful—be specific!)

Final Reminder

This is your last chance to refine your reel before final submission. Use your peers' feedback wisely! 🚀